Peer Assessment Feedback By Emily

Good points about our music video:

• Mise-en scene enhances the effect
• Lyrics and visuals are effective
• Pace is well maintained
• Good lip-syncing
• Editing so far is on the beat and releates well to the genre
• Excellent setings, especially the graffiti
• Different shot types and distances
• Characters and props
• Setting
• Use of night and daytime
• Good costumes and clothing
• The studio scenes
• Good colourisation
• The range of different angles we shot at
• Good dancing fits within genre well
• Good use of splitscreen

Things we need to improve on:

• Lighting (which we are currently improve as well as the colour on each shot in our music video)
• Effects and transitions, we need to experiment with these like others do with the R&B genre.
• Improve some of our lip-syncing (we are doing some extra little bits of filming today, of calvin, so it is clear what he is saying)
• More close-ups of Ana singing ( we can crop shots to allow this)
• And one of our backing dancers, he was dancing awkwardly (!)